Young Poet in the Making

The DLR

My daughter wanted to start her own blog , but at 8 she is too young. I have agreed to post this so she can get feedback. She wrote this after 1 journey on the DLR. If you have never rode on the DLR Firstly Shame on you. Either way this captures the experience very well





#3 The DLR
On the DLR it’s very weird
There is no driver it’s like they disappeared
Till the driver disappeared I took their place
The lady behind me said “easy does it”
I turned my head round
It made me lose concentration
I done a bad bend.
As we came to the station
I forgot to pull up
It was n’t good
Now I've disappointed my whole neighbourhood

Name: Riyana
Age: 8